Re: Brochure - Second pass

Lookin' good, Ron! I have one more suggestion. I think it would be good to combine the "How do we Help" section with the "How are we organized" section. I'm thinking you could move the title "How Are We Organized" and the first paragraph under that section up to the "How Do We Help section".

I would then eliminate the "How Do We Help" title, replace it with "How Are We Organized", and just combine the information from both sections. You can play with it and see what you think.

I think it getting real close to an excellent draft that can be presented to Brad Burns. The importance of having approval from governmental representatives cannot be underestimated. After all, it will be the governmental agencies that have the final say on whether Deep Creek will be accessible and available for future generations to enjoy. Keep up the good work. I hope to meet you at the springs someday. I cannot make any upcoming meetings at DCHS to my insane work schedule, but someday soon I'll slip back to DCHS...Regards, Paul P.