Ron,
In an earlier post, I mentioned something to affect that I thought your "First Pass" flier was fine and was good to go, but then Wiz said that we need to take more time with it and it got me to thinking a little bit more and decided he's right.
As good as your flier reads or sounds, I feel we something with it is not quiet right with it or something is missing. I think we're approaching this flier thing the wrong way. I am working on a little different approach or maybe you could say style.
I am hoping to post it here later tomorrow some time for you and others to view and would like some feedback.