Re: Brochure - First pass

Hi Ron, I reviewed your first draft and I find it to be excellent! You've incorporated all the major points we've discussed on this forum and hopefully what you've talked about at your meetings. My only very minor suggestion is you might be able to eliminate just a little repetition of information in the various sections. As you re-review you'll catch it.

I'm glad we are moving along with this. I also agree with Wizard that you should probably run the draft by Brad Burns and also discuss our ideas for handing it out. Maybe you can E-mail him. Does Wizard have his E-mail address?

I still think it would be nifty to have some sort of hot springs logo unique to Deep Creek that we could place on the brochure. I'll admit to no artistic ability, but maybe one of the regulars here could create something either hand drawn or in Adobe Photoshop or Illustrator.

Keep up the good work.. hopefully the next steps would be to print some copies of the brochure after approval/changes from Brad Burns.